Enchantment on Caribbean Isles

First of all i am not a writer, but I love to write and visualize the world around me and beyond that. I have never ever wrote any story, even a short 4 lined stanza on my own, but this time i don’t know how am i starting this story, and i will try to keep it very interesting at every turn.

I just want you all to read and comment, and point out my mistakes and help me being a good writer, because its my passion and hobby to think and develop, but don’t know how to start or write it.

Well as its name suggests, its about sea, water, islands, ships and love of course. And that’s all happening in Caribbean sea over centuries ago.

Plot: There is a sailor from caribbean islands, loved by his fellow men because of his generosity and kindness. One day a band of pirate takes over the sea and captures their ports and all cargo, forcing them to be slaves. Then this man stood against the pirates and recruited his fellow men to rebuild a strong fleet and flush these pirates away from their seas. Between this, he met a beautiful young lady from the pirates side who instantly fell in love with him, but he didn’t, instead they both face extreme calamities while welcoming this relation and at last they started meeting in private and established the bond of love.

So i will be publishing this story episode wise… n will wait for your replies and comments. And i hope you will give me positive feedback!!

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